Details-Middle

What details do we need in the middle of our story? he wus brking. At school the kids lafd at him becus of his name. He got kot from a shragr. He clamd a thre. I got my water gon and I plad wiht (sc) th my frends.
 * Misha**
 * Michael**
 * Ella**
 * Thomas**
 * Erin**